The diagram below shows one method of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The diagram explains the process for the making of ceramic pots. Overall, there are a total of 12 stages, beginning with collecting raw materials and culminating in the final products.
Initially, raw materials are dug from under the ground. After that, they are delivered by a truck to a factory where they will be processed. The next stage is that materials are moved on a chain towards the crushing machines so as to be made smaller in size. Consequently, the pieces are mixed with water before being transferred to moulds through a tube. At this point, moulds are left for 4-6 hours, then are opened for shaped clay pots to be taken out. The white clay pots then are placed into an oven under the temperature of 1000 degrees Celsius. Next, the pots are soaked in brown paint to add color. Once the pots have been fully colored, they are put in the oven again to be fired in order to maintain the paint even after a long time of usage. Ultimately, brown clay pots are completed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...g of ceramic pots. Overall, there are a total of 12 stages, beginning with collecting...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n a chain towards the crushing machines so as to be made smaller in size. Consequently, ...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: smaller
... the crushing machines so as to be made smaller in size. Consequently, the pieces are mixed wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56497175141 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38158211122 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5072813419 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0999932966287 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412421376617 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475383973487 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812644094495 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0088235901991 0.0819641961636 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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