The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
There are five stages by which bricks are manufactured then packaged and delivered to the consumers.
In the process of manufacturing bricks, a machine called digger is used in the first stage to excavate clay from the ground then the excavated clay is placed into a metal grid which is removed oversize of pieces and dropped into a large roller for the second stage. Afterwards the clay is passed through sand and water whereby either wire cutter or mould is used to form bricks in the third stage. Then in the fourth stage,the bricks are installed inside a drying oven where they are kept for a period of 24 to 48 hours. For the fifth stage, the bricks are moved to the first kiln for a moderate temperature from 200°c to 980°c then moved to the second kiln for a high temperature from 870°c to 1300°c then carried over to the cooling chamber where it is cooled for a duration of 48 to 72 hours.
After the whole process, the bricks are now packaged and loaded into the truck to be delivered to the consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , a
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Suggestion: , the
...he third stage. Then in the fourth stage,the bricks are installed installed inside a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: installed
...Then in the fourth stage,the bricks are installed installed inside a drying oven where they are kep...
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Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64824120603 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43402893494 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51256281407 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9597393105 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.142857143 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343200204812 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209329935972 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.252795506112 0.0843802449381 300% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31850940369 0.15604864568 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.291301553688 0.0819641961636 355% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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