The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Picture illustrates the process of brick manufacturing from clay collecting to delivery of bricks. A glance at the picture clearly reveals that there are several steps involved for the manufacturing of bricks.
Firstly, Digger is being used to collect the clay from the land and it is going to the filtering process on the roller. The result product send for shapping of the brick by either wire cutter or mould.
In order to dry the bricks, drying oven is used. And it takes 24 to 28 hours to complete the drying process.
Secondly, dried bricks are going through three different chambers which are two klins and cooling chamber. First klin produces the temperature between 200 - 980 degree celsius and second kiln emits high temperature of 870 - 1300 degree celsius of heat. At the last step it allows to cool down for 48 -72 hours in the cooling chamber. The final products are involved in the packaging process and send it for the delivery.
In Conclusion, it takes several days to produce bricks from clay following many steps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 188, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kiln' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilns'.
Suggestion: kilns
...een 200 - 980 degree celsius and second kiln emits high temperature of 870 - 1300 de...
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Line 6, column 281, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cooling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: cooling
...ius of heat. At the last step it allows to cool down for 48 -72 hours in the cooling ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88202247191 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49079168336 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1306317826 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126720618946 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515134696278 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353170520304 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667552507492 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343098085989 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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