Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion OTEC is a very well developed method to utilize ocean resources as a energy resource. The design of this system is purely based upon the fact that ocean water has different temperature range as we move down to ocean bottom.
In order to understand its working, we must first have a basic idea that there is a certain range up to which sunlight can penetrate ocean water , which is called the photic range. Thus, by taking this in account this module was developed. It mainly has three chambers namely; Evaporation chamber, Electricity production chamber and Condensation chamber. To start with the process, first seawater having temperature around 30 degrees enters evaporation chamber where the water gets evaporated as pure water and residual salt water heads down to another chamber. The pure water then enters electricity production chamber where it forces turbines to rotate hence producing energy which is then converted into electricity.
In the next step, the pure water after rotating the turbines reaches condensation chamber which is situated at some depth where the temperature is about 5 degrees . The water along with the waste salt water from first chamber, rushes outside this chamber and condenses the pure water which can be collected from the outlet. This process works in loop. This system can be called one of the best examples of non conventional resources of energy in near future if implemented properly.
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- The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion OTEC 71
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- Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises What do you think might be the reason What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10126582278 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53658449322 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540084388186 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 237.0 22.4926829268 1054% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1209.0 112.824112599 1072% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 237.0 22.9334400587 1033% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 53.0 5.23603664747 1012% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159549157713 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159549157713 0.103423049105 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136360410267 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961727788556 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 121.1 13.2329268293 915% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -177.54 61.2550243902 -290% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 96.9 10.3012195122 941% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.78 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.06 8.06136585366 236% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.4329268293 499% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 96.8 10.9970731707 880% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 97.0 11.0658536585 877% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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