In today's world where development is the main moto for almost all the people of the world, the one factor that is getting neglected in this process is the depletion of Natural Resources. The rate of consumption of natural resources is much higher than that of its formation.
Natural resources are the gifts that our Mother Nature gave us but they way we have own them is quite a thing to worry. We have been paying the price of our development by risking the future of our younger generation. The urbanization is the main reason for deforestation. The frequent problems of land slides, forest fire, flood are the results of cutting trees and ruining forests. According to some reports, by the end of this century there will be cities, left with no water to drink. Think of a life without water ! Can you?
Now the question arises, is there any way we could save our Nature? The answer is yes, there are several steps that could lead to healing of our nature from the damaged caused by our so called development. The first and foremost step is 'Sustainable Development'. We need to encourage ways to adopt 3R's in our life : Reduce, Reuse, Recycle. The climate change is yet another point to consider here. We have to adapt to lessen the burden of green house effects.
At last, to sum up this, I would just say that if we could develop from being 'Primitive Man' to a well developed Homo sapiens .We can definitely find alternatives to same our natural resources. All we have to do is to come forward and unite for the mission.
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- Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises What do you think might be the reason What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle 79
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion OTEC 71
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48540145985 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39320625897 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 274.0 20.2975951904 1350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1229.0 106.682146367 1152% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 274.0 20.7667163134 1319% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.0 7.06120827912 496% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20792188208 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20792188208 0.084324248473 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1233074169 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036586897904 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 136.7 13.0946893788 1044% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -198.17 50.2224549098 -395% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 109.0 11.3001002004 965% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.68 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 111.6 10.1190380762 1103% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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