The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

Ocean thermal energy conversion process uses the temperature difference between deep sea water and warm surface water to generate electricity. The sea water passes through different stages which results in electricity and drinking water is the by product of this process.

The warm sea water at the surface level which is at about 29 degree Celsius is converted into water vapor by solar energy and as it moves forward it gets separated into salt less vapor and salty warm water. This salt less vapor enters evacuated evaporation chamber and rotates the turbine connected to this chamber resulting in generation of electricity.

The remaining salt less water vapor enters into condensing chamber. The deep sea level cold water which is at 5 degree Celsius along with the salty warm water produced in the first stage helps in cooling the incoming water vapor. The drinking water is produced in this stage by the condensation of water vapor.

The salt water which is left after condensation stage is released into the sea and the whole cycle starts all over again.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ps in cooling the incoming water vapor. The drinking water is produced in this stag...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...by the condensation of water vapor. The salt water which is left after condensa...
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.340540540541 0.268076937826 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.145945945946 0.116061578633 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108108108108 0.0759168565197 142% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0216216216216 0.0366838410393 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0108108108108 0.0131127313244 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12972972973 0.155750635184 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0594594594595 0.0379272487307 157% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46096921921 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0108108108108 0.0210936926555 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.113513513514 0.0948980150116 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0216216216216 0.00967000014798 224% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1069.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.9 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0395480226 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316384180791 0.337110787985 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242937853107 0.247514529752 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152542372881 0.171178102325 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101694915254 0.112407865282 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46096921921 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491525423729 0.546246751206 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.2557419511 49.3433353143 82% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.125 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3914242326 42.9750493124 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.625 135.714022679 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 23.0094962315 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.689975730869 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 46.4187853107 47.7609492067 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.9696969697 2.94281807926 101% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218328981252 0.418131533498 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.259858696557 0.181151798455 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111949175656 0.0850326197045 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.762674305218 0.706616315825 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147207651367 0.157042692854 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142598515087 0.228904883108 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388506498869 0.108899403657 36% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.449820258382 0.367819155151 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.060678618169 0.0812612215331 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172771282391 0.316326947829 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342980128738 0.0921553760075 37% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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