The diagram shows the structure of a basic rocket engine and also describes how the combustion process is occurred in rocket engines.
There are two main tanks into rocket engine which are namely fuel tank and oxygen tank. The grey arrow signs the fuel, while the white arrow represents the oxygen. Firstly, oxygen and fuel travel separately through the oxidizer pump and fuel pump, and they extend to the combustion chamber with the injector.
Afterwards, the fuel and oxygen reach with each other, and then the energy needed to drive the rocket is produced in the combustion chamber. Finally, these combustion products exit from the nozzle of the rocket engine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tanks'?
Suggestion: tanks
...n rocket engines. There are two main tank into rocket engine which are namely fue...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'tank' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tanks'.
Suggestion: tanks
...n rocket engines. There are two main tank into rocket engine which are namely fue...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fueled', 'fuelled'.
Suggestion: fueled; fuelled
...ank into rocket engine which are namely fuel tank and oxygen tank. The grey arrow si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 33.7804878049 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 561.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 110.0 196.424390244 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25829966022 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 283.868780488 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.19611822 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235315493635 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12317748455 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18049966182 0.0843802449381 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216071318794 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214325320617 0.0819641961636 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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