the diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information in fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
The given illustration describes the manufacturing procedure along with method by which information acknowledged in advance steps to allow modifications.
Overall, the process of both indicators for manufacturing steps and information feedback are illustrated. In which, this flowchart is described a number of stages, from raw materials to sell items are accurately formulated. In between, planning and testing also are represented. Apart from, the data of the feedback which are given to initial methods and adjust them in order through some techniques such as research on products and design also.
Firstly, the method of manufacturing is initialized with raw materials and components which are manufactured. As illustrates, these stages are stored in storage and then items are entered for the production planning. Meanwhile, after research and design of the goods, it is planned and assembled. At last, after inspection it is put forward for the testing as well as packaging and at the end of the procedure it is prepared for the sell to consumer after packaging the items.
Secondly, whenever planning of the product for design and research is done then it is fed back from sales to planning and then back to storage. Subsequently, sales department is also acknowledged to the market research and after that it enters to the advertising and packaging. Likewise, design is estimated turn from testing as well as market research.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...such as research on products and design also. Firstly, the method of manufacturin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, apart from, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35682819383 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09470660165 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511013215859 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4694506859 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131516272379 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461395771261 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409414366636 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809261965719 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211822628853 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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