The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of earth.
The diagram represents about how the water moves form sea to atmosphere in a cyclic motion.
Initially, the water on the surface of sea turns hot by getting the heat from the sun. When the sea water reaches to a specific temperature, the process of evaporation gets initiated which facilitates the water vapours to rise above the sea towards sky where they get accumulated at a certain height followed by the formation of clouds.
Proceeding further, the clouds drifts toward the direction of wind. When they become too heavy to collect more water content then, the process of condensation begins which is also facilitated by fall in temperature. This process than results in rain or snow fall at a particular place. The rain water on the ground flows toward water bodies and eventually gets added into sea again where the cycle restarts again.
Overall, the water moves through a cycle from sea to above in the atmosphere and returns back with the process of evaporation, cloud formation and condensation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...too heavy to collect more water content then, the process of condensation begins whi...
^^^^
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'waters'.
Suggestion: waters
...ow fall at a particular place. The rain water on the ground flows toward water bodies...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returns'.
Suggestion: returns
...from sea to above in the atmosphere and returns back with the process of evaporation, cloud ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01183431953 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69495285884 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585798816568 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2974694031 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22584933751 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987367165355 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590930670534 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143248913363 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178868758677 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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