The diagram illustrates the process of building an igloo.
The diagrams demonstrate how an igloo is constructed. Overall, this is a man-made process and contains 13 linear steps, beginning with snow being cut into blocks and ending with ventilation holes being drilled in the wall or roof.
First of all, a specialized saw is used to cut hard-packed snow into blocks. The large ones are used to form the foundation of the igloo while other blocks of snow are smoothed before being stacked up in a circle upwards. Then, an entrance is created by digging a hole under the wall, and the last opening on top is filled with an over-sized block to form a dome.
Following this step, loose snow is utilized to cement all the crevices to strengthen the igloo. Then, the wall inside the igloo is smoothed by hand, and the entrance is created and covered with snow blocks. Finally, air holes are cut in the wall or roof to ensure that the igloo is well ventilated.
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- Some people think that children should aim to be the best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51633986928 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28689065192 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0761757577 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8181818182 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113440822052 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487814475381 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530342293281 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887098271185 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536987309882 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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