Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. What are the problems of focusing mainly on economic development? Suggest possible solutions.
In today’s fast-changing world, economic growth has a fundamental role in proliferating finance of the countries. However, only researching finance also takes a toll on country’s development. I believe that there are a myriad of solutions to tackle the problems that it brings to society.
It is undeniable that in some developing countries, the governments are spending an amount of time to find the answers for economic questions. There are a multitude of aspects needed to be concerned such as education, environmental issues.For instance, in some rural areas, students lack educational devices and the quality of teaching which are equipped in most schools in important cities like Ha Noi or Ho Chi Minh city. Thus, illiteracy becomes popular and it jeopardizes the growth of the young generation who will be the leader of the country. To tackle this issue, the government should upgrade to modern devices from old objects and dedicate to enhancing the teaching quality which is the most crucial problem.
Besides, the environment is also a prominent issue that the government may handle. Focusing on promoting the economy means the problems associating with the environment will increase including kinds of pollution and traffic congestion. It is considered that noise pollution, air pollution will become worse and worse without the concern of the leaders. Therefore, the mortality rate increases unstoppably as people are heavily affected by pollution which impacts deeply on the countries. By some methods such as planting more trees beside the roads or creating environmental organizations for cleaning and transmitting information about the importance of living standard.
In conclusion, concentrating on the development of the economy is an indispensable way to improve the level of the country; nevertheless, other issues also play a crucial role that the government should notice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...development. I believe that there are a myriad of solutions to tackle the problems tha...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...such as education, environmental issues.For instance, in some rural areas, students...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54266211604 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13895592494 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6859154229 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.923076923 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150126408365 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473888683396 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414639699772 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803683895965 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286204170945 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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