The diagram shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

Essay topics:

The diagram shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The illustration represents the information about the process of producing electricity in hydroelectric power stations.
Overall, it is clear that there are various steps performed in order to generate electricity. To begin with, water flows through a reservoir from the river and ends with the transmission of electricity to the national grid.
It is conspicuous from the graph that the process is a two-fold process that includes night and day processes. Initially, water from a river is channeled through a high-level reservoir backed up by a dam. Following this, Intake is opened during the day and water is flowed during the day to the power station. In addition to this, during the day, reversible turbines transfer water to the generator which leads to the development of the electricity and then transmitted to the nation grid by power lines. The rest of the water runs to a low-level reservoir during the day. However, in the night, water pumped back from low-level reservoir to high-level reservoir using reversible turbines. The important thing is that intake is closed during the night.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ater to the generator which leads to the development of the electricity and then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, in addition, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19662921348 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91862989337 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511235955056 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2924921194 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13169580197 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558968112674 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685397385366 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11933895186 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597632006436 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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