The diagram shows how orange juice is produced

Essay topics:

The diagram shows how orange juice is produced.

The diagram gives information about the process of orange juice production.
In general, there is a total of 17 steps, including three main stages: delivery, storage, and consumption is the final stage.
At the beginning of the process, a lorry delivers fresh oranges to a factory before washing oranges in a hygiene machine. Then, these oranges are extracted into two substances consisting of orange pulp and fresh orange juice. Animals feed the orange solid, while fresh orange juice is packaged and sold for retailers or shops, or transported to an evaporated factory to eliminate water.
Next, the evaporation process involves boiling the water away until the concentrated juice is left. After that, this liquid is filled in containers and stored before being shipped to a warehouse. In the manufacture, water is added to make orange juice and then packaged. Finally, packaged orange juice is delivered to supermarkets for sale and consumption.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33112582781 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79237843209 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629139072848 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9805245197 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4444444444 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280308427994 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124856135306 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084999841453 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167203790146 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103721569967 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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