The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The picture given below shows how a town from Australia used the technique of Rainwater harvesting for drinking purpose.
Overall, the process consists of 3 main steps.
1)filtration 2)Storage 3)Water treatment.
In the initial phase ,rain water from all the houses is transferred to a Water Filter through drainage.This is the first step of the process. In this phase water is passed through this filter and the filtered water goes ahead for further processing.
Secondly, filtered rain water is stored in a large storage tank which is connected from one side to the water filter and on the other side by water purification plant via pipes.
In the final phase, the stored water through the pipes goes from storage tank to the water treatment plant. It is the most important step in this process. Here, water is purified and further treated with certain chemicals which removes remaining impurities from the water making it potable. After which the potable water is transferred to individual houses via network of pipelines. Hence, completing the process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ad for further processing. Secondly, filtered rain water is stored in a large...
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...plant via pipes. In the final phase, the stored water through the pipes goes ...
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...st important step in this process. Here, water is purified and further treated wi...
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...urified and further treated with certain chemicals which removes remaining impuri...
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...ities from the water making it potable. After which the potable water is transferred ...
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... houses via network of pipelines. Hence, completing the process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20348837209 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59171282979 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.579355552 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212143383287 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756056021881 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972223807832 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108480393764 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119674517633 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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