The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee
The diagram illustrates the cycle of living of an insect called honey bee.
Overall, there are 4 primary stages in a bee’s life, which begins with the laying eggs process of female bees and finishing with the forming of mature bees in 1 month and approximately 6 days.
To begin with, the females lay around 1 to 2 eggs after every three days. The eggs have oval shapes which then hatch after nearly half a month. After that, the nymphs, immature honey bees, will moult three times before becoming young adult bees. The first time is after eggs hatching 5 days, then one week and the last time is 9 days after that. Moulting is a process in which bees shed their old feathers, hair or skin in order to transfer into a new shape or a more mature stage.
Finally, after 4 days of emerging into the young adult form, the bees finish their final step to grow up to mature ones, which are ready to produce and lay eggs for the next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: LAY_AROUND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lie around'?
Suggestion: lie around
...y 6 days. To begin with, the females lay around 1 to 2 eggs after every three days. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45714285714 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11269438183 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622857142857 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4550774417 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182119739321 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887162065225 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123529069276 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161718029523 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138472378446 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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