the diagram shows the manufacturing process from making sugar from sugar cane. summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram depicts the production of sugar which is deprived from sugar canes
At first glance, it can be seen that the manufacturing process goes through two main stages, which are growing and cropping and industrial process.
Initially, sugar canes are seeded in large number to the field, then it goes through 12-18 months of growing up. After sugar canes have been fully developed, the farmers either cut it off manually or using professional truck in order to harvest it.
In the third step, the sugar cane trunks are granolated into juice by a crusher. Next, its juice goes through a limestone filter to be purified. The filtered juice continues to an evaporator tank where it is heated and transformed to syrup. Following this track, it is in the centrifuge step that sugar crystals are segregated from the syrup. Ultimately, newly produced sugar is stored in an open box for drying and cooling purposes.
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- the diagram shows the manufacturing process from making sugar from sugar cane summarise the information by selecting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56186730894 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5221987602 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260275419189 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989773027314 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782872643989 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170717749428 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926782572732 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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