The diagram shows the process of making cheese
The given pictorial reveals that the five stages from mixing ingredients to filterlisation in the production of soft cheese.
Initially, it is a vividly apparent that the water and milk is mixing in the mixer then, this mixture is sent from the cooling process. Before, adding the salt in this mixture it is cooled at 5* Celsius for 2 hours. In the next step, the mixture is breakdown through the fermented process at 35 degree Celsius for 2 hours.
In the Fourth Stage, the material is evaporated for 8 hours at 300* Celsius . The steam is allowed to escape throughout the outlet. In the last stage , the material again cooled at 5 * Celsius for 8 hours . Finally, the waste water is filtered through the bottom outlet and the soft cheese is collected in the upper filter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
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Suggestion: ,
...throughout the outlet. In the last stage , the material again cooled at 5 * Celsiu...
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Suggestion: .
... again cooled at 5 * Celsius for 8 hours . Finally, the waste water is filtered th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 644.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55087019966 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8933077177 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600276587516 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246522249137 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318343605697 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0326185045404 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262582403435 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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