The diagram illustrates the process in which how the embryos of sheep are replicated. Overall, the process involves six main stages and is time-consuming, which begins with choosing two female sheep(female A and female B)and ends with cloned sheep from female A.
First of all, two female shops are chosen, which are given as female A and female B. Next, the body cell of sheep A is taken out for DNA extraction. In contrast, instead of body cell, the egg cell is pulled out from sheep B, and the nucleus from it is then removed for further requirements. Following this, the extraction stage starts where the DNA of sheep A is fused to the egg cell of sheep B.
In the fourth stage, after the fusion, the developed cell turns into an embryo which will take a long time. Next, the embryo is then put into the uterus of the foster mother. Consequently, the production is successful when the lamb of sheep A is cloned, which is the final result.
- The diagram shows the life cycle of a frog Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 53
- The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature 73
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- It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school To what extend do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, then, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53939393939 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51200240974 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551515151515 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5224922208 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2222222222 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213836119977 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968932443306 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089964650129 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126515577799 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897744766226 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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