The diagram shows the relationship between a number of different languages.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The diagram delineates the hierarchy of the English language. The English language is mainly classified into American and British English branch.
The areas such as Canada and USA certainly come under the American English branch. Canada also comprises of two parts -Angelo phone and Francophone Canada. Likewise, USA has been divided into total six parts. It consists of Philippines, American Samoa, west coast, mid-west, north-east coast and puerto-rico southern.
On the other hand, the British English branch has been classified into 6 further branches. Jamaica and Barbados is for West Indies and
Malay and Chinese for the far east, respectively. In regards with Australasia, this sub-branch manifest Australia and New Zealand. In addition to that, Indian-Pakistan branch consists of all forms of Indian English. Altogether Iris, English, Welsh and Scottish comes under British Isles.
Further, Africa branch divides into west, anglophones and east Africa.
Thus, it can be inferred that, the British English branch has been largely classified as compared to American English branch.
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- The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010 and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compar 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations 61
- Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in the society while other think that individuals can have a lot of influence What is your opinion 67
- The diagram shows the relationship between a number of different languages Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...American and British English branch. The areas such as Canada and USA certainly ...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...he American English branch. Canada also comprises of two parts -Angelo phone and Francophone...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aica and Barbados is for West Indies and Malay and Chinese for the far east, resp...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, so, thus, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70731707317 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71740594363 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.541493528 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6153846154 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0179337301835 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00932526822683 0.103423049105 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022164745013 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0129852102759 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290358128791 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.3012195122 89% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.95 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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