The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by ivyvo on Fri, 12/27/2019 - 07:46

The diagrams present the structure of a wind turbine and where it can be placed. Overall, most turbines are very large and located at blank spaces.

All of the wind turbines have the same shape. It includes four basic parts. First of all, it has a tall tower made of steel. At the top, there are three blades which were made of fibreglass or wood. When there is a strong wind, the turbine will spin. Its speed and direction are controlled by a computer which receives information from wind sensor. Followong this, the out put that is about 1.5 megawatts of capacity is produced.

According to the diagram, there are three possible places for a turbine. For large turbines, it should be located at weather side of a hill, where has the strongest wind. Another position is rooftop, where can find a domestic turbine producing 100 kilowatts of power. The last possible place that most turbines are located is in the sea. It not only has strong wind but also does not affect the land because the distance is about 10 - 60 kilometres far from shore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...ry large and located at blank spaces. All of the wind turbines have the same shape. It i...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65053763441 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35104444699 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6105378127 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7857142857 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 22.9334400587 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197681381172 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648817702897 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551646011716 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136310555665 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159096229212 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.8 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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