The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

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The diagrams below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled.

The flow diagram illustrated the information about, the production and recycling of Glass containers, suggest bottles, in two diagrams.

Through the following information, it is observed that, the process of production of Glass contains four steps: mixing, Beijing, shaping and glass containers. Initially, raw materials are mixed together, such as sand, soda, limilestone, and other chemicals. Secondly, mixed material has Melted in blast furnance nearly the temperature of 1500° C. After that, a particular shape has been given to the molten glass by blowing it. Finally, the glass container is ready to use.

Next to this, second diagram reveal the mechanism of recycling of glass. First of all, used glass is collected , and has sorted by colour for good quality. Furthurmore, glass has washed in order to remove impurities. Following the process, washed glass is crushed and melted. However, at the end, glass has moulded in new product, and ready for production.

Overall, it is evident that, all steps are necessary for getting a good result. If, even one step has been missing, the whole process will be vanished.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...production of Glass contains four steps: mixing, Beijing, shaping and glass conta...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s. First of all, used glass is collected , and has sorted by colour for good quali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31843575419 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76195493478 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8384208856 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2307692308 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201439425734 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691323469959 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058020999704 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121677255077 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775036314255 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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