The provided picture demonstate the production cocoon from silkwarm eggs while other process chart illustrates various types stages involved in silk cloth production.
As is presented in diagram silkworm uses mulberry leaf as food and they start their life cycle stage by laying egg on leaves. After 10 days larva develops from egg and in next stage silk thread are produced by grown larva after 4-6weeks interval. Within 3-8 days these larva turns into oval shape cocoon and fourth stage of life is completed. If cocoon are not used for silk then they gives birth to mature moth after 16 days.
As can be seen, process of silk cloth production includes five stages. Firstly, selected cocoon is boiled into water to remove unwanted products. Following this cocoon is unwinded and it produces upto 900 meter thread. Before dying or weaving clothes the thread need tovbe twisted. Once thread have dyed or weaved then they are ready for making silk clothes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aying egg on leaves. After 10 days larva develops from egg and in next stage silk...
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...s from egg and in next stage silk thread are produced by grown larva after 4 6wee...
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... produced by grown larva after 4 6weeks interval. Within 3 8 days these larva turns into...
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.... Within 3 8 days these larva turns into oval shape cocoon and fourth stage of li...
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... cocoon are not used for silk then they gives birth to mature moth after 16 days. As...
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...ure moth after 16 days. As can be seen, process of silk cloth production include...
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...twisted. Once thread have dyed or weaved then they are ready for making silk clo...
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...d. Once thread have dyed or weaved then they are ready for making silk clothes.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'then', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.298850574713 0.268076937826 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.195402298851 0.116061578633 168% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103448275862 0.0759168565197 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287356321839 0.0366838410393 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0287356321839 0.0131127313244 219% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137931034483 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0919540229885 0.0379272487307 242% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.21216000378 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0114942528736 0.0210936926555 54% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0402298850575 0.0948980150116 42% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00574712643678 0.00437022459523 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 960.0 1161.00487805 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.9 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92592592593 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216049382716 0.247514529752 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154320987654 0.171178102325 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0617283950617 0.112407865282 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21216000378 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716049382716 0.546246751206 131% => OK
Word variations: 80.011333701 49.3433353143 162% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2 23.0094962315 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2072107052 42.9750493124 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 23.0094962315 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => OK
Readability: 37.8049382716 47.7609492067 79% => OK
Elegance: 2.09090909091 2.94281807926 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269198943334 0.418131533498 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0897987000608 0.181151798455 50% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0706583866052 0.0850326197045 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.495374214159 0.706616315825 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184501676228 0.157042692854 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094635093628 0.228904883108 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988207185106 0.108899403657 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.123410171019 0.367819155151 34% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0588995355628 0.0812612215331 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202234180582 0.316326947829 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103512335633 0.0921553760075 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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