The first diagram illustrates that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First, the month spawns the eggs in abundance in mulberry leaf and each egg will take ten days to gradually become silkworm larvas. It is discernible that larvas used mulberry leaves as sustenance to nourish and supportively render them likely to produce a cocoon of silk thread around their bodies during approximately six weeks. After a period of almost three weeks, the adult month, per se, eventually, emerging from these cocoons and the life begins again.
The second diagram demonstrates clearly that the use of raw material constituting the cocoons in the comprehensive process of producing silk cloth. In the early stage of the cocoons, once picked up rigorously and after that, they are boiled in water with a purpose of making the threads easily separated in the unwinding stages followed by. Each thread measured with varying length, with about between 300 to 900 meters long, contingently, they can be twisted or also entwined together and undergo the process of dying to render them colourfully alluring. Consequently, they will be utilized to produce cloth in the subsequent stage.
In conclusion, it is veritable that the cocoons stage of the silkworm is used to generate silk cloth through a simply traditional process.
- Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 78
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12442396313 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72939470339 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6213147318 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.555555556 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166143516097 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819011052805 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751054156415 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119298116692 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181092718546 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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