The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
The first diagram depicts the life cycle of the silkworm while the second one describes several steps to produce the silk cloth.
In general, the process undergoes a series of steps with the aid of mulberry leaves.
To specify, the life of a silkworm begins with the born of some eggs produced by the adults' moths on the mulberry leaves. After a period of ten days, the eggs develop into silkworm larvae. Then, eating mulberry leaves within 4-6 weeks, these silkworms turn into those with thread covering their bodies. In the period of 3-8 days later, these larvae become cocoons before turning back to the form of moths in 16 days later.
The procedure of the silk clothes production is demonstrated in the second diagram with five stages. Firstly, some cocoons are selected and boiled at high temperature, followed by the step of unwinding into threads. These threads whose length vary from 300 meters to 500 meters are, next, either twisted and dried directly or woven and finally dried. Strikingly, only by dint of the usage of drying chemicals is cloth colored to be a demand of users.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, so, then, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85106382979 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29417551326 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7777652934 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210568154324 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828309145327 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10996215476 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132071821107 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122123208687 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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