The process diagrams illustrate the whole life of the species of salmon [from ‘fry’ to ‘adult salmon’ stage] / [starting from a small fish called 'fry' until 'adult salmon'.].
It's noticeably apparent that salmon fishes have three different [basic] steps from little fishes, namely 'fry' to the adult salmon and requires a range of suitable typical environment [in their life cycle], respectively.
At the first stage in the process, the matured salmon swim back to upper river with slow moving water from the ocean to lay the eggs. The eggs are placed between reeds which are located among [/adjacent to] small stones. After approximately 5-6 months, 'fry' will crack from the eggs with the average length of 3-8 cm and head to a new fish habitat, to be precise, the fast flowing lower river [because of moving ability] and stayed for about 4 years. At the following stage, the fish will swim to a wider and broader water circumstance - open ocean, after they become 'smoh' with around 12-15 cm of body size. Finally, they will spend roughly half a decade before they produce the egg in the upper river.
The process cycle again and again with every generation of their offspring.
- It is generally accepted that families are not as closed as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. 11
- Some people believe that anyone can create art such as painting, poetry, music and so on. Others think that a person should have special abilities to create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Some people believe that to become the vegetarian is the only way to keep healthy Do you agree or disagree 78
- As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree? 96
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?What other measures do you think might be effective? 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.995 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49988236171 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.486585797 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.875 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124702892635 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474966649708 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528616319747 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840306926962 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529472429776 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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