For a long time, people hold different views about whether everyone can create art or only those talented individuals are able to make it. Personally speaking, I partly agree that a small part of people are chosen to devote themself to bring extraordinary arts to the world.
On one hand, some part of people argued that art is not mysterious and exists in our daily life. On the other hand, others believed the genius children. For example, Mozart began showing his talents when he was just three years old and he can perform improvisation songs at 8 years old. What’s more, Picasso was a child genius as he demonstrated extraordinary painting skills at an early ages.
There are several reasons why I’m against the idea of “everyone can create art”. To begin with, although it’s true that everyone can draw, paint or play the musical instruments, it’s nothing but works. Secondly, the arguments depend on the definition of “art” in different people views. More clearly, I considered art as an activity which extends the border of beauty of human beings. We can’t expand the range of a concept to the extreme. For example, even if I could draw paintings and play the guitar, can I regard myself as an artist? The reasonable answer is “no”. Last but not the least, not only talents but also numerous efforts are required when a person dreams of becoming an excellent and creative artist.
After having discussed the most pertinent points about this issue, I’m convinced that while everyone could bring art into ordinary lives, only the people with both natural ability and determination have the opportunities to contribute to art world.
- Some people say that the government should pay for health care and education of its citizens Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion 74
- More and more people work from home and study from home with the development of computer technology Do you think it is positive or negative development 84
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 61
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 87
- Some people believe that to become the vegetarian is the only way to keep healthy Do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14028776978 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82866728785 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643884892086 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6757982301 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215269972251 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718149227521 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560393688547 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140397496642 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042798743206 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.