The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

Submitted by Noah1997 on Sun, 01/19/2020 - 04:27

The diagrams illustrate how salmon, which is a species of large fish, goes through its life cycle.

Overall, the fish goes through three major phases is its life time. It begins its journey in the slow flowing waters of upper river area and then returns here after a couple of years as an adult to complete the cycle.

Their circle of life starts with small eggs, that are laid underneath small stones covered with reeds, in calm waters of upper river area. After hatching, the baby fishes, which are known as 'fry' and measure between 3 to 5 cm in length, travel downstream to the fast flowing waters of lower river, where they stay for about 4 years. When these babies grow to about 12 to 15 cm, they move on to open sea and are now called 'smolt',. At sea, they spend approximately 5 years of their lives to attain adulthood. Due to this transformation to adult-form, salmon can now measure up to 76 cm in length.

Lastly, adult salmons make the arduous journey back up the river to the breeding grounds, where they lay eggs ultimately completing the cycle.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... goes through three major phases is its life time. It begins its journey in the slow flow...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... on to open sea and are now called smolt,. At sea, they spend approximately 5 year...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58115183246 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.315083552 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8599892619 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106556625278 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502872874178 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690273880129 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091019666221 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081968014624 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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