The given maps provide insights into the layout of an indigenous museum in the years 1957 and 2007.
Overall, in 2007, there were fewer trees and the museum was quite bigger than it was in 1957.
Looking from the outer parts of the museum, in 2007, most of the trees from the South were cut down and a curved path was utterly removed, to make space for a car parking site. To the North of the diagram in 1957, there was a wide range of trees until 2007 they were all chopped down to enlarge the whole structure of the local museum. Moreover, in both 1957 and 2007, the garden still remained.
Turning to the structure of the whole museum, instead of leading up to the national history exhibition, in 2007, the entrance was relocated to the left-hand side and directed to the museum shop. A reception was built next to a cafe, which was newly erected in the bottom right-hand corner. Furthermore, the museum storeroom was demolished and the local history room was moved to the central building. Finally, special exhibitions and an education center were added to the northeast of the museum.
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- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, look, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64432989691 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33357182126 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6191865447 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174834127541 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851599863792 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472658947215 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120650953975 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255645817439 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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