The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The procedures elucidate the major steps and raw materials utilized in the cement-making process, and how cement is tended to manufacture concrete for building purposes.
Overall, the cement producing process consists of six consecutive stages, which commence with crushing limestone and clay and terminate with packaging special bags, whilst concrete production will be ready with the help of four various materials.
To begin with, limestone and clay are the fundamental sources for manufacturing cement production. Both of them should be crushed by a specific crusher in the first step and the powder of them will mix with a mixer. Subsequently, the prepared mixture is transferred to the cylindric rotating heater in order to heat the product. At the next stage, a heated mixture should be crushed with the help of a grinder, then produced cement will place into the cement bags in the last step.
Moreover, the concrete-making process commences with preparing raw materials, which are 15 percent cement, 10 percent water, 25 and 50 percent sand and gravel respectively. All of these resources are streamed into the concrete mixer and mixed at a certain time. Then, constructors can utilize this mixture for their building purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34693877551 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89161060859 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1651887831 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200098708291 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858782719567 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803456328883 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145334048263 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078750873889 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.