The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram give information about process oils in use of promotes of perfume.
Overall, there are essentially ten stages in the oils perfume, how oils is expected begging with water and fire, steam and aromatic plants, five and six stages is oil vapor and cold water, finally is hydrolat. However, we can see clear more if we look at the specific stage.
In the first stage, new products displayed in fire and water are contained in a laboratory flask, converted to steam in the third stage. After people used water and fire for process and steam becomes solidified and settles at the top is aromatic plants. Steam and oil vapor for production. After being gathered, the oil are taken to steam oil vapor and ready start to a new stage.
In the next five stages, when aromatic plants are driven by steam oil vapor to the top of tube and going to cold water and condenser to hot water in the seven stage. When have hot water, people start mixed water with essential oil. Finally, go through many processes of becoming hydrolat ( aromatic water).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gathered, the oil are taken to steam oil vapor and ready start to a new stage. I...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'watered'.
Suggestion: watered
...water in the seven stage. When have hot water, people start mixed water with essentia...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough many processes of becoming hydrolat aromatic water.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67934782609 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27466916309 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6526406024 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10559273774 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539119934323 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537287285857 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928577731346 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575311636967 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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