The diagrams below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons relevants.
The diagram shows how is the transformation of large fish called the salmon and how the fish is moving on different stages of his life along the river. The salmon is moving from upper river to lower river after that from fast flowing to the sea and the last stage is again to the slow-moving part of the river. These different stages of the salmon life has different length in time.
The first stage of salmon life is starts in the upper river where the salmon adult is putting its eggs. This stage is the shortest and it takes nearly 6 months. In this stage the salmon eggs are changing in fry.
The second stage is longer and it take rough 4 years during this stage the salmon is spending its life in fast flowing water of river.
The third stage of salmon life is spent in open sea and it is with about 1 year longer then the second stage.
At the end of those stages the adult salmon will take a trip to the upper river to put its egg.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20879120879 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92194629244 2.65546596893 72% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0718355043 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1111111111 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13503029031 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732064035187 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070689376389 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783724908948 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439246896563 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.93 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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