The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where is relevant.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where is relevant.

Submitted by adnana121 on Sun, 02/24/2019 - 18:20

The given pie charts is comparing the proportion of how is been used water in six different world zone. As it had been shown in illustration in the majority of areas the main purpose for using water is agriculture and as well we can depict that one zone is having the biggest amount of using water for agriculture purpose and the smaller amount of using water for industrial purpose.
First of all we can see that in four of six areas the water used for agriculture is counting more than 70 percent. The first one is Central Asia 88 % followed by Africa with 84 %the next one is South East Asia with 81 % and the last one of four is South America with 71 %. The remaining two were using each of them less than 40 % of all water for agriculture. (North America 39% and Europe 32%)
On the other hand Europe and North America were using the biggest proportion of water for industrial use 53 % and 48 %. Other four zone were using under 12 percent of water for industrial zone.
For water been used for houses the percentage is between the biggest 19 % reached by South America and the smallest 7 % reached by Central Asia and South Asia.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'zone' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'zones'.
Suggestion: zones
... been used water in six different world zone. As it had been shown in illustration i...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the other hand Europe and North America were using the biggest proportion of wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44711538462 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31436569717 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475961538462 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8418801074 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24874272381 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125732289639 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712295756627 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161250610882 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799454141755 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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