The given first flow diagram, illustrates the process involved in glass container manufacturer ,and the second diagram highlights the process of recycling use glass. It is clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that, the glass is manufactured by following four distinct stages, in which three main raw materials are used to have intended end product. Moreover, it requires five key steps to turn used glass into new glass.
Prior to the production, gathering raw materials: sand, soda ash, lime stone and other chemicals.In next step, the mixture is heated at very high temperature approximately 15000 degree celsius in glass furnace. Afterwards, the molten glass can be giving to any shape by blowing, to produce finished products.
In order to recycle used glass, this can be begin with the collection of used or other broken glass that thrown into the garbage. Nextly, the collected material separated by colour ,and washing the product with water to remove impurities. The product will be pure. After this, the pure collection send on crush and melt process. At last, the resulting molten glass cam finally be moulded to create a new materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... cam finally be moulded to create a new materials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73808373589 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.5492358597 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131911995036 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533001122684 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313535785558 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828544158984 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250122243105 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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