The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use
The two given pie charts give information about the use of energy in Australian household energy. While the first chart describes how the energy is used, the second one illustrates the greenhouse gas emission result from this energy use.
Overall, we can see the significant trade that heating is the major of energy consumption while water heating is the main cause of greenhouse gas emission. Cooling, on the other hand, contains the lowest percentage in both household energy use and household greenhouse gas emission.
To begin with, cooling only takes up to 2% of the energy use while 42% of Australian household energy use comes from heating. However, those heating does not include water heating since water heating requires up to 30% of energy use. On the third rank is other appliances with 15%. Refrigeration, lighting, and cooling only take the trivial part of 7% or lower.
As for Australian greenhouse gas emissions, water heating ranks first with 32%. The second place belongs to other appliances with 28%. Refrigeration and heating share third place here with only 1% differences. Lighting and cooling, together, take the minimum amount of 8% and 3% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng, together, take the minimum amount of 8% and 3% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, third, while, as for, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72048555715 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3714337375 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373040005402 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136995216954 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156567814738 0.0843802449381 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254596695699 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182040202978 0.0819641961636 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.