The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use
The pie charts give information about the percentage of Australian household energy use and the greenhouse gas emission from such energy use.
Overall, heating (including water heating) consumes the majority of Australian household energy use and therefore, releases most greenhouse gas emissions. Cooling, on the other hand, takes up the minimum percentage of both household energy use and greenhouse gas emission resulting from such action.
To begin with, heating and water heating account for up to 72% of the household energy use and consequently give out a majority of greenhouse gas emissions. However, heating takes up to 42% of energy use but the gas emission released from such action is surprisingly low at 15% while the percentage of water heating remains almost the same around 30%. As for cooling, the energy use and the greenhouse gas emission from such action take the trivial amount of 2% and 3% respectively.
It is also noticeable that refrigeration, lighting, and other appliances do not use up a large percentage of household energy. In fact, the statistics show that they only consume 7%, 4%, and 15% in turn. Nevertheless, the greenhouse emissions resulting from them take all twice as much the percentage as the energy use.
- The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The tables below give information about sales of Fair trade coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 61
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 78
- The tables below give information about sales of Fair trade coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 81
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, as for, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19306930693 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89095771436 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485148514851 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3221387565 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 5.23603664747 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413157657139 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210576149731 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114167852214 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316662906218 0.15604864568 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092133528518 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.