The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two pie charts given in the passage namely 'Australian household energy use' and 'Australian household greenhouse gas emissions'. As their title states first chart depicts which components comprise of how much energy consumption and the second one which of those components contribute to how much green gas emissions.
To begin with first pie chart, water heating contributes 30%, household's energy consumption, Refrigeration 7% , Lighting 4% and cooling 2%. However, the highest energy use is in heating which 42% of the households use 'Other Appliances' which could mean any electrical or heating appliances contribute 15% of Australian households usage.
The second pie chart depicts that water heating is 32% contributer to greenhouse gas followed by 'Othe Appliances' at 28%. Cumulatively, these two are primary, precisely 60% contributor of greenhouse gas. Whereas, refrigeration, lighting, cooling and heat are 14%, 8%, 3% and 15% respective contributor's of green house gas. It can be concluded that cooling is least energy
and greenhouse gas contributor.
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- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compari 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7125 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28191375733 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4707169937 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316836325143 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144389440535 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820544542787 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198100483927 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858948640067 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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