The first chart below shows the resuluts of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98, The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.

There are two tables in which the first table illustrates the results obtained from a survey on 100,000 people the reason they travelled abroad from 1994 to 1998. As for the second table, it depicts the destinations the people travelled to for the same period.

Based on the chart, it highlights that the reason why most people travelled abroad was due to the purpose of having holiday. This reason showed the highest figure over the 5-year periods and it showed an increasing trend from roughly 15,000 in 1994 to over 20,000 in 1998. It was a quarter rise. There were people who travelled abroad for business purpose. The trend of this reason was raising gradually from 3,155 in 1994 to 3,957 in 1998. There was a huge difference if figures between the reasons for holiday and business. As shown in the table, there were a 5 times higher in 1994 and 7 times in 1998 for holiday over business. The other reason, visits to friends and relatives showed a similar trend with holiday and business in which the figures in 1994 and 1998 were more than 2,500 and around 3,000 respectively even though there is a slight drop in 1995. People who travelled for other minor factors remained constant over the years at a range between 980 and 990 although there is a sharp rise in 1996 and 1997 to 1,030 and 1,054 respectively.

According to the other chart, it can be seen that most people travelled to Western Europe as it has the highest number of travellers throughout the years. Western Europe has an inkling trend over the years from around 19,000 in 1994 to nearly 25,000 in 1998. North America also showed an increasing trend from nearly 900 in 1994 to about 2,000 in 1998.

To sum up, 1998 is the year which has highest number of people travelled abroad compared to other years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
... To sum up, 1998 is the year which has highest number of people travelled abroad compa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'as for', 'to sum up']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20178041543 0.268076937826 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.121661721068 0.116061578633 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0652818991098 0.0759168565197 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0415430267062 0.0366838410393 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0207715133531 0.0131127313244 158% => OK
Prepositions: 0.163204747774 0.155750635184 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0296735905045 0.0379272487307 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.28168507138 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0385756676558 0.0210936926555 183% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00296735905045 0.00175180941692 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.106824925816 0.0948980150116 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00296735905045 0.00437022459523 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178041543027 0.00967000014798 184% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1789.0 1161.00487805 154% => OK
No of words: 316.0 196.9 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66139240506 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.73763899035 113% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335443037975 0.337110787985 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.186708860759 0.247514529752 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0981012658228 0.171178102325 57% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0696202531646 0.112407865282 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28168507138 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458860759494 0.546246751206 84% => OK
Word variations: 45.3435861459 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 8.93414634146 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0666666667 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7067385397 42.9750493124 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 135.714022679 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.466666666667 0.689975730869 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 39.7375527426 47.7609492067 83% => OK
Elegance: 2.14516129032 2.94281807926 73% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413777735058 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.169989066242 0.181151798455 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.123633780033 0.0850326197045 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579406041319 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.212860276642 0.157042692854 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191343648753 0.228904883108 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126040759965 0.108899403657 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.405685067367 0.367819155151 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0628932726133 0.0812612215331 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309448480342 0.316326947829 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129209866582 0.0921553760075 140% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 7.1512195122 182% => OK

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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