The following bar chart gives statistics showing the aspects of quality of life in five countries.
The given bar chart illustrates the quality life of the people in nations such as, The United States, Bangladesh, Bolivia, Egypt, Indonesia. The chart deals with the aspects like GNP, Daily calories supply, Life expectancy at birth and infant mortality.
Overall, USA stands at the top with approximately 13000 GNP per head. Whereas, all the countries including the USA records the lowest life expectancy at birth.
On one hand, Bangladesh, Bolivia, Indonesia have around 2000 daily calories supply per head, when it comes to GNP Bangladesh stood at the bottom. However, infant mortality remains same for all.
On the other hand, USA and Egypt have same proximity for daily calories per head. But, when we compare the GNP USA is 1o times greater than Egypt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with approximately 13000 GNP per head. Whereas, all the countries including the USA re...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Indonesia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ne hand, Bangladesh, Bolivia, Indonesia have around 2000 daily calories supply per h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 642.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 125.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.136 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47030362506 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4773710885 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982672400526 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452570510326 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673207907117 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635110287603 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930104907312 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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