The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture indicates how heat been remained by greenhouse gases and human's activities influence in the earth, which cause global warming in a result.
The energy from the sun reach the earth by heat. The heat first meet atmosphere and some may reflected by it and then radiated into space. Some heat energy will reach the soil. The soil will absorb some heat, but a load of energy will be reflected and some will back to space. The greenhouse gases can cut into this process and trap some energy. These energy will be leave to soil and raise its temperature. The human's activities can create carbon dioxide, which is the main content of greenhouse gases. The cars and factories can release greenhouse gases into atmosphere. Although tree can absorb carbon dioxide, many trees are cut down so the gases cannot be changed into oxygen.
Overall, human's activities promote global warming by increasing the carbon dioxide emission.
- Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries? 73
- some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study. Others argue students should be made to study alone. What is your opinion. 56
- Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school while others think children should begin in secondary school Discuss both sides and give your opin 56
- The figure shows the results of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people. 67
- An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs Why do you think so many children are overweight What could be done to solve this problem 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y from the sun reach the earth by heat. The heat first meet atmosphere and some may...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this energy' or 'These energies'?
Suggestion: This energy; These energies
...into this process and trap some energy. These energy will be leave to soil and raise its tem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03205128205 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35796383038 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0085387297 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3636363636 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981186860549 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473468344409 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378491995243 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0535294609974 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390228000828 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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