The following graph shows the papulation in uk and USA in 2010 and 2015 .

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The following graph shows the papulation in uk and USA in 2010 and 2015 .

The given line graph . reveals the information about the papulation in UK and USA between 2010 and 2015 .
Having a myopic look at the graph . It is evident that in 2010 in UK and USA papulation was 40 million and 30 million respectively .
In 2011 in UK it decreased and was 20 million whereas in USA it increased and become 40 million . In 2012 in UK it did not change but in USA it declined at 30 million . Next year in 2013 in UK it reduced slightly . However in USA it inclined and ended at nearly 40 millions . In 2014 in UK it exchanced and finished at 40 millious . On the other hand in USA it fell down and dipped to approximately 20 million .
In 2015 in UK it came down and finished at 30 million but in USA it renained stable .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...tion in UK and USA between 2010 and 2015 . Having a myopic look at the graph . ...
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...n in UK and USA between 2010 and 2015 . Having a myopic look at the graph . It i...
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...5 . Having a myopic look at the graph . It is evident that in 2010 in UK and US...
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...s 40 million and 30 million respectively . In 2011 in UK it decreased and was 20...
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...n USA it increased and become 40 million . In 2012 in UK it did not change but in ...
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...nge but in USA it declined at 30 million . Next year in 2013 in UK it reduced slig...
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...t year in 2013 in UK it reduced slightly . However in USA it inclined and ended at...
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...inclined and ended at nearly 40 millions . In 2014 in UK it exchanced and finished...
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...it exchanced and finished at 40 millious . On the other hand in USA it fell down a...
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...n and dipped to approximately 20 million . In 2015 in UK it came down and finish...
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...30 million but in USA it renained stable .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 590.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15492957746 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50864624717 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 106.607317073 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471830985915 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 179.1 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5719401755 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.6363636364 112.824112599 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9090909091 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328839359769 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14447332166 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103287356917 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268623068245 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112777716931 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 13.2329268293 35% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.9 11.4140731707 52% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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