Food production in US
The picture illustrates the process that is used in food production in United States.
Initially, many food resources such as red meats, rice and fishes are likely consumed by society. Rice and vegetables as the important things are harvested by farmer, while red meats and milk are found by farmhouse in the villages kept and feed by cattlemen with good nutrition, and fishes are group by fisherman from the sea. The next step, the compliments are cleaned, labelled and packaged with a good packing as much as needed. Afterward, all the products are distributed to different types of market, such as retails and restaurants.
The products distributed to retailers are sold with a lowest price to the consumer and bought by people as home preparation consumed by family as a homemade foods. On the other hand, products bought by the restaurant are cooked into several kind of dishes such as steaks, sausages, and other modern meals before it is served to the consumer.
Overall, there are several steps of food chain productions in US, where all products are distributed into two different types of market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...s. The retailers sell the products with a lowest price to the consumer, and bough...
^
Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'food'?
Suggestion: food
...ration consumed by family as a homemade foods. On the other hand, products bought by ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 301, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'several kinds'.
Suggestion: several kinds
...ought by the restaurant are cooked into several kind of dishes such as a steak, sausages, an...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08585858586 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67981530337 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7604373126 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.888888889 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314170148839 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129170142753 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127944350638 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227562981136 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13192305733 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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