GALLERY

Essay topics:

GALLERY

The two maps illustrate changes in the layout of an art gallery ground floor
between 2005 and the present.
Overall, the art gallery has undergone several alterations including the
rearrangement of the functional rooms and the addition of new facilities. These changes have
made it more visitor-friendly and accessible.
The three exhibition rooms to the right of the entrance have remained
unchanged in terms of size and position. Wheelchair access has been improved with the
installation of a ramp at the entrance to the art gallery and a lift next to the stairs at the back of
the entrance hall. Furthermore, the rectangular reception desk has been replaced with a round
one and relocated from the left to the middle of the entrance hall, facing the entrance.
On the left of the map, it is clear that the gallery room has been moved to
replace the ‘café & shop’ area in the top left corner, and a vending machine selling coffee and
food is now seen in front of the new gallery room. Exhibition Room 4 now is now dedicated to
temporary exhibitions and a children’s interactive playground.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99465240642 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9341652112 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3200538884 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25114454723 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102493586898 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106198620451 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082210485195 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113604592072 0.0819641961636 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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