The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities
It is clear from the graph and table data on the average monthly temperatures and the normal number of hours of sunlight each year in three large cities.
Overall, notwithstanding the New York's feature was the lowest poing at the beginning at about 4°, it rocket to 30° coming to middle of July.
Looking at the details, early of the period, the temperature of London and New York rises slightly,but coming to April their features start rise dramatically and coming to August their numbers were at 24 and 29 degrees.However,at the end of the year their temperatures fall down rapidly at 10 and 5 degrees.
Morever, the index of Syndey was at 26 in January, after 6 months it decreased to 20. Fanally, in December the line was came to 25 degrees.
Furtermore, the table presents information about total anniversary hours of sunrise for three cities.
New York's and Syndey's results were almost similar at 2500, while the Syndey's outcome was at a 1180.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rockets'?
Suggestion: rockets
... poing at the beginning at about 4°, it rocket to 30° coming to middle of July. Lo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...re of London and New York rises slightly,but coming to April their features start ri...
^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...their numbers were at 24 and 29 degrees.However,at the end of the year their temperatur...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...umbers were at 24 and 29 degrees.However,at the end of the year their temperatures ...
^^^
Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orever, the index of Syndey was at 26 in January, after 6 months it decreased to ...
^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6 months it decreased to 20. Fanally, in December the line was came to 25 degrees...
^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... 20. Fanally, in December the line was came to 25 degrees. Furtermore, the tabl...
^^^^
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of sunrise for three cities. New Yorks and Syndeys results were almost similar ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92073170732 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669699737 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5066356999 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165945204756 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894907875153 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137103144828 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102750403526 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143557383472 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rockets'?
Suggestion: rockets
... poing at the beginning at about 4°, it rocket to 30° coming to middle of July. Lo...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...re of London and New York rises slightly,but coming to April their features start ri...
^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...their numbers were at 24 and 29 degrees.However,at the end of the year their temperatur...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , at
...umbers were at 24 and 29 degrees.However,at the end of the year their temperatures ...
^^^
Line 6, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orever, the index of Syndey was at 26 in January, after 6 months it decreased to ...
^^
Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6 months it decreased to 20. Fanally, in December the line was came to 25 degrees...
^^
Line 6, column 122, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... 20. Fanally, in December the line was came to 25 degrees. Furtermore, the tabl...
^^^^
Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of sunrise for three cities. New Yorks and Syndeys results were almost similar ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92073170732 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669699737 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5066356999 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165945204756 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894907875153 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137103144828 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102750403526 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143557383472 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.