The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The given line graph shows the comparison of the birth rates between China and USA from 1920 to 2000. What stands out from the given line graph is that there was an upward trend in the birth rates of China in 1950. It is clearly seen from the given line graph is that a fluctuation was recognized in the birth rates of China from 1920 to 1935. This happened with the birth rates of USA at the same time. After that, the period from 1935 to 1940 witnessed a drastically drop in the birth rates of China, from 15% to 5%. Over that period, the birth rates of USA increased quickly from 1945 to 1950, reached a peak at 15%. At the same time, The birth rates of USA grew sharply, which was 5% higher than the birth rates of China was. This is the highest Percentage during the period. Subsequently, a dramatically reduction was noticed in the birth rates of China between 1955 to 2000. In general, there was a steady fall in the birth rates of USA from 1955 to 2000, which was higher than the birth rates of China was
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 456, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('drastically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('drop') instead of another adjective.
... the period from 1935 to 1940 witnessed a drastically drop in the birth rates of China, from 15% t...
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Line 1, column 750, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rates of China was. This is the highest Percentage during the period. Subsequent...
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Line 1, column 798, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('reduction') instead of another adjective.
...entage during the period. Subsequently, a dramatically reduction was noticed in the birth rates of China...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25906735751 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09373872425 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430051813472 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7959674141 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411741424798 0.215688989381 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216584165083 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124900791773 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.411741424798 0.15604864568 264% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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