The graph below compares the changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.
The line graph provides information about the Birth rates in China and the USA over the period from 1920 to 2000.
It can be clearly seen that the birth rate in China began the same as the USA, but it ends up lower than it starts at the end of the period.
Starting at 10 in 1920, the birth rate in China increased significantly from 1930 to 1935. However, over the following years, there was a sharp fall and stood at 5 per year before reaching a high of 20 in 1950. Next, the percentage of birth plugged to 9 in 1955 and ended up at two by 2000.
Meanwhile, the USA had the same beginning as China. It fluctuated to 13 for the first years, then decreased dramatically to 5 before reached of 15% and stood at 7 in 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rth plugged to 9 in 1955 and ended up at two by 2000. Meanwhile, the USA had the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 585.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14893617021 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34263811167 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 166.5 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7010277567 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5714285714 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302608445438 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151572213227 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120229765325 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207717999379 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111025956567 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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