The given line graph analyses the figure of visits to the Music Choice and Pop Parade sites on the internet for 15 days.
At first glance, the 1 numbers fluctuated at this time, but there was an increase at the end of the period.
Now, turning to the details, the Music Choice's 2 numbers experienced a rise to 60 % at the day of three, before hitting a free fall to 20 % the day after. There was a dramatic growth in this area to 120 % in the 12th day, followed by a sharp decrease to 70 % after three days. According to the data of Pop Parada declined a fall from120 % to three times less for a week, before jumping a celling trend to 150 % in the 11th day. While the figure for pop parade went up dramatically to 170, the quantity in music choice reduced to 70 percentages.
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- The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school(s) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, third, such as, in the first place, in the third place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70832547055 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66049382716 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8826690985 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 5.23603664747 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150614514418 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619022455585 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101102756697 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128101730754 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137460437998 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.