The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report from a University lecturer analysing the information shown below.
the given graph estimate the number of visit to 2 music websites on the internet the data is shown in thousand hits which is clearly and coherently represented
As it can be observed from the graph, the Pop Parade starts from 120,000 hits on first day, which show slight variation on next three days. Furthermore, the trend declines to 60000 on day 5. Moreover, there is a zigzag trend till day 9. On the day 10, the hits shooted up to 120,000 hits, which touches the peak of 180, 000 hits by the end of 15th day.
Moving further, the Music Choice, have only 40,000 hits on first day, which fluctuates from; day two to day 4. The graph shows slight variation in next 7 days. On day 12, the hits reaches its maximum limit of one 120,000 hits that falls to 80,000 hits by the end of 15 day.
Overall, the pop parade shows more variation in hits; in contrast to, music choice. The number of hits of pop Pop Parade is high then the Music Choice by the end of 15 days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, then, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3097826087 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11601570127 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5307956899 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1111111111 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906761209099 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412810220291 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048099324197 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777242015423 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482394859448 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.48 61.2550243902 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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