The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
The linear graph illustrates two music sites like music choice and pop parade on the web visiting by people.
Overall, it can clearly seen from chart, the pop parade is most popular site as compared to music choice and pop parade site has more visitors.
Primarily, it is vividly apparent that in the first three days the uses of pop parade site is stable on 12,000. But, it 's visiting is decrease in next days, it is notice near by 60,000. The pop parade site show fluctuations in 5 to 9 days it is record at 60,000 to 90,000. Then, the number of visits to this site is increase after show some down falls and it is reached on peak in last day it is above 160,000.
Furthermore, the visitor of music choice site is show ups and downs in first eleventh days it is witness as 40,000 to 20,000. after that, it is incline dramatically 20,000 to 120,000 in next days . In the last day, it is stay on below 80,000 before show some zig zag between 120000 to 130000.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-05 | hoaihoang2801 | 67 | view |
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...ites like music choice and pop parade on the web visiting by people. Overall, ...
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... parade on the web visiting by people. Overall, it can clearly seen from chart,...
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... is decrease in next days, it is notice near by 60,000. The pop parade site show fluctu...
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...days it is witness as 40,000 to 20,000. after that, it is incline dramatically 20,000...
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...matically 20,000 to 120,000 in next days . In the last day, it is stay on below 80...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31491712707 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25912391529 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558011049724 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9002950054 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233121060453 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104736025608 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11051572849 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178781794231 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127271460913 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.