The graph below depicts the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart below shows how electricity is used in an average home in the same country.
The diagrams illustrate how many units of electricity are demanded during 24 days in the two seasons (winter and summer) and the percentage of electricity use in an average home in England. It is immediately apparent that the general trend was for electricity demand to fluctuate during the period. In addition, the electricity usage in heating rooms and heating water show their superiority over that in other rooms at average home.
Regarding the number of the electricity demand in England, in winter, the demand stood at about 35000 unit in the 0 day, increasing to roughly 40000 in the third day, and then dropped noticeably to 30000 in around the end of a week, before hitting a high off nearly 50000 –the highest level of electricity demand in England− and tailing off approximately 32000 at the end of the period. Moreover, in summer, the request experienced a wave, which is fluctuated around 18000.
Turning to the use of electricity in an average home, heating rooms and heating water had a larger proportion of 52.5%. This was followed by the category of the oven, kettles, washing machines, the group of vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electronic tools, and the bunch of lighting and radio. While the former was listed at 17%, the two latter had the similar percentage which was recorded at 15%.
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- The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006 73
- The pie charts show the result of a survey of children’s activities. The first chart shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second chart shows the activities in which the girls participate. 84
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The bar chart below shows information about water use worldwide (Km3) from three different sectors between 1910 and 2010. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er that in other rooms at average home. Regarding the number of the electricity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, regarding, so, then, third, while, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9592760181 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6951997851 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565610859729 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.7727321975 43.030603864 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317950541382 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136323417234 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129591691471 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217695614856 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132493867298 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.