Overweight is a much-discussed problem for people and has some effects on more people, nowadays. This essay will identify reasonable causes and estimates some potential impacts on people.
Regarding the causes, perhaps, the main cause of this situation is environment influences. Example can be seen in people who may choose not to walk or bike to the store or to work because of a lack of sidewalks or safe bike trails. Therefore, it would affect people’s behavior to not do more exercise in their daily activity. Moreover, A further well-known problem is related to lack of physical activities and unhealthy diet. For instance, people who commit fewer activities while consume excessively food,especially junk food, would tend to be overweight. This is because the incoming calories do not balance with calories used.
Turning to potential effects on the people. It is often said that overweight may leads to health problem. This means that people who have overweight, compared to those with a normal or healthy weight, are at increased risk for many serious diseases. This ranges from Hypertension to Coronary heart disease. In addition, A further widely-observed impact is related to learning disabilities. People overweight is invariably linked with ADHD (attention deficit and hyper activity) and learning disabilities. This is due to the imbalance of hormones in obese people.
Overall, It is logical to conclude that not only are there some reasons why overweight happens, but there are also some effects on many people. While environment influences, lack of physical activities and unhealthy diet seem to be the main causes, there are problems of health and learning disabilities that obesity brings about.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun activities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , especially
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40892193309 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01282252092 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8323402933 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199208276637 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677584761802 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046179427855 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127186391708 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430582614695 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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